Random Contest: Neopian Anthems

[stampsyne]

http://www.neopets.com/spotlight_subs/r ... test.phtml

Info and Rules:
Every world has to have an anthem, right? How else would you show your Mystery Island or Faerieland pride! (Besides the balloons, t-shirts, banners, Petpets... you get the point.)

This week, your job is to write the lyrics for your world's anthem. Do you live in Tyrannia? Write the best Tyrannian anthem ever heard by the Town Hall elders. If you live in Faerieland, you must completely knock the socks off Fyora with the best anthem known to the Faeries. (Etc, etc, blah blah blah. You get the point again.)

Rules... (read this or your entry might be doomed before you even submit it)

- Please include AT LEAST 3 verses and 1 chorus (which can be repeated, of course). You can do more than that, but anything shorter will be deleted.
- Your anthems can be silly, triumphant, or whatever you wish, but anthems always proclaim the greatness of the worlds they represent so make sure let us know what's so special about your world.
- Our form only takes about 1,000 words so stay under that and you're peachy. It's not a novel... it's an anthem. Sheesh.

Lawyerbot returns from scheduled maintenance and says:
- No copyrighted material! This means no "sung to the tune of [insert copyrighted song here]" because then we'll have to delete your submission and no one wants that.

Check out last weeks winners! I placed SECOND!

EDIT: Darn submissions. Hope they fix it soon to I can post my tune!

ERROR : Sorry, you are not allowed to have words, punctuation, or a combination with 25 characters or more in length in your description.

[untouchable dragon]

I can't post mine either :/
I hope they fix it soon

[dreamer]

I'm not sure if I want to do this one yet. I love to write, but I've never tried writing a song before.

I wish I would of entered the short story contest they had, the one where you wrote a passage from an already-existing Neopia book. Oh well, it's too late now.

[matchbow]

Didn't someone write a song "we will freeze you" for the day of action. that was hilarious! if it was user voted, they'd easily win. but since it's not, i wouldn't recommend it

[pattypus]

Congrats, Stamp!
I wish I could come in second... maybe if I actually entered!

[hi23]

i just entered (you can pm me if u want to c it, i dont really care, i already sent it in so u can't copy it, lol, but its bad anyway) mine goes along with god saves the queen lol

[The Wonder Weezel]

i just entered (you can pm me if u want to c it, i dont really care, i already sent it in so u can't copy it, lol, but its bad anyway) mine goes along with god saves the queen lol

umm... they said in the rules very specifically... it has to be original... it cant "go along" with anything...

[untouchable dragon]

ERROR : Sorry, you are not allowed to have words, punctuation, or a combination with 25 characters or more in length in your description.

Can someone kindly explain why I'm getting this error message when I'm submitting mine?

[everconfused]

Dragon, alot of us are getting that error. Either that or some really weird image type error (since there's no image I think it's really weird).

I hope they fix it soon. I actually, while fixing dinner last night, got an idea, ran and started writing. Got a 5 verse with chorus "anthem" done. Not that it's very good, but at least I did one! Now to get it submitted before I lose my nerve.

[stampsyne]

I solved the error by putting a space after every paragraph marker.

I try to enter EVERY Random Contest.

Block 1
Welcome to Maraqua, It's an underwater world.
People are nice here, they won't eat you.
You would like to have gills too!

Refrain
The great blue deep, thier city is not bad.
Pirates shove off, you make us sad!

sub-chorus 1
Oh I want to be where grarrls have fins and teeth,
where a coral jubjub can quirt water at me!

Chorus
Let us swim to Maraqua! We should have left yesterday.
Maraqua, the land in the sea. The wonderful world of Maraqua makes you think!

Block 2
They've got under water fishing and a bubbling pit, giant slug, and petpets,
Maraquan homes, and battledome weapons.
A restaurant names kelp. it's hard to get in there.

sub-chorus 2
Oh I want to see Blumbaroos as horsies,
where the Meerca fish can puff out at me!

Chorus
Let us swim to Maraqua! We should have left yesterday.
Maraqua, the land in the sea. The wonderful world of Maraqua makes you think!

Block 3
I forgot to mention something that will get you keyed.
Hidden in a far off corner is a statue of mystery!
Don't forget the pages that are devoid of color waiting for you and me.

sub-chorus 3
Who would not want to be where chombies swim free
where Shoyrus have shell, not wings!

Chorus
Let us swim to Maraqua! We should have left yesterday.
Maraqua, the land in the sea. The wonderful world of Maraqua makes you think!

[Kess]

Okay, it's got a subtle sloth nazi-esque reference (Deutchland Uber Alles - Virtupets Above All), a star wars in-joke and a veiled MST3K reference...

I submitted mine:
Virtupets Above All

When you look up at the night sky
O, Neopet! Look up and dispair!
Our satellite menace, circling above
Like a giant frozen meatball of love
It's the space station way up there!

(chorus)
Virtupets! Virtupets! Long live virtupets!
Our love for her is built on fear!
Patriotism is mandatory,
Even when Sloth's not here.

From bulkhead eleven thirty-eigth
To the garbage chute 56-B
Her great vats of transmogrifier
Are glinting in the cosmic fire
Of incinerator seventy-three.

(chorus)

Faerie gifts are made for fools
The hypnohelmet works much faster
Sloth gave us great technology
We offer no apology
For forcefield or virtu-blaster

(chorus)

Soon Kreludor and neopia
Will fall to Sloth's sludge-blaster
So raise your slimy tentacled paw
Or robot arm or mutant claw
And salute our evil master!

[Fishblade_Bluestream]

*twitch*


How could you ENTER? I couldn't even get my entry in! ;~;

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[stampsyne]

*twitch*


How could you ENTER? I couldn't even get my entry in! ;~;

>>************

I put spaces after paragraphs. Before I did that I got the message

ERROR : Sorry, you are not allowed to have words, punctuation, or a combination with 25 characters or more in length in your description.

[Kess]

Yep, that's what I did too, had to go add a space after each line.

[pattypus]

Yep, that's what I did too, had to go add a space after each line.

Same here.
I also put extra spaces inbetween paragraphs.