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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16216041/

Erm, yeah, I was bored, and this is was the fruits of my boredom. I'm trying poses, clothing detail, ect. since I'm not good at drawing. I need lots of practise..

But, anyways, whadda think?

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I love it! I like the expression, and the shading on the clothing is really nice. Well done!

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Set by Dragonfire

I, too, like the shading on the clothing.
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*envy*

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Mrf.

I want to crit this. *scratches at ears* Because I think I actually have a lot to say on this picture... to help (I promise), but the easiest way for me to do this would be to blue line it... and or... print it out, trace it lightly and then show you corrections that way.
But I won't touch it... until you say yay or nay.
*shrug*

Up to you.
I'd like to crit it, because I see a lot of potential in the piece, and I want to give it the critique it deserves, but I can't do that... without showing you what I mean.

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Thank you Eo and Spycat, makes me all fuzzy. Ehehe. ^^

Oooh, by all means please do Ahoteinrun! Seeing as how your so much better than me, I've seen you art around here, boggles my mind how you do it. Heh. ^^;

I know I made a ton of mistakes, but meh, I was broed what can I say. I also don't do..well..good pictures very often, and even the so called "good ones" have tons of mistakes. Hehe.

But I'd love it if you crit it. ANyway you'd like, I need all the help I can get.

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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v231/ahoteinrun/redlinecrit1.jpg

*blinks*

Yes.
I printed it... at 33 percent the original size, and then outlined it lightly. The black lines follow your outlines pretty much exactly.

If you need clarification of what i've written (I admit, my printing is... odd.. and I tend to blend letters together, especially f and l if they're together) just ask.

The left leg... (of the humanoid in the drawing) needs more work then what i've done in the crit. I'll clarify more when i'm not nearly asleep.

Yes.

*pats* But I still think your work has a lot of potential. Take that as high praise, I don't say it often.

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Wow ahoteinrun that is neat marking, the red core lines(is that what there called?) remind me of Naruto and body chakra flow, but I won't indulge and bore you call to death. The picture itself +Phantom- reminds me of a emo person for some reason, and that is cool.

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Set-poala

To me they're basic sketch lines, and they've been used for centuries.
If you look at sketches of the old masters (Leonardo, Michelangelo... etc) they use lines like that. They even self correct without erasing.
And their sketches are phenomonal. *worships them*

And I have no idea what Naruto or body chakra are. *blank*

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It's pretty good! The only critisism I have is that the postion is a little awkward. Other than that, it's really good.

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Ah, thank you very much!
I see, I did have many mistakes. Heh. ^^;;
Hmm, I should practice doing figures and bodies more.

I appreciate this very much. Thank you, oh and thank you Puck and Blk Mage as well.

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