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This is a sketch I drew the other day during.....er........nevermind.
It's a picture of my character, Hikaru, well, sleeping.
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m135/hikaru_dream/Hikaru--sleeping.jpg

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I know it's not good but it's not really bad either. I think the balance isn't too bad, and it did work out pretty well for me
The thing I don't like much is that it doesn't look like she's leaning on the tree.
Any advise to get better? Please

P.S. RPers this is the one I'm always playing.
Also, please don't mind the feet much, I forgot to do them

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neopets→hikaru_shine
Flyff (Mia)→HikaruKi

You might want to try curving the spine in toward the tree a little more. People don't sit rigidly after all, they sort of bend into positions. That might help. Also, the proportions on her legs seem a bit off....It looks like they should be a little longer.

I love the idea and the general tranquility of the picture, though. The shape and flow of the tree is particularly well done. You definately have potential, just keep working at it! I hope to see more of your art in the future^^

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Doumo
Thanks.

Now that I think of it, I tend to draw legs short
I have short legs

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neopets→hikaru_shine
Flyff (Mia)→HikaruKi

No it's not bad at all! It's very good in my eyes! All it needs now is color.

I rate it 9.9/10

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All the things you could improve on were said by Hakojo, so I won't repeat myself. I think it's really good. The tree actually looks like a tree (I always draw trees weird)!
I bet if you colored it, it'd be SUPER awesome.

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Thanks
Problem is, I'm not bad at coloring, I'm just not good at coloring my own pictures..........
Maybe I'll try it sometime soon.

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neopets→hikaru_shine
Flyff (Mia)→HikaruKi